So last night I had a pretty gruesome dream dealing with Me, Alora, WT and Solar. ...... I still have no idea what triggered those.
I'm only going to go into detail about mine
Solar was taken out by a Banette
Alora by a Litwick, Lampent and Chandelure
WT by a Dusknoir.
After the deaths of the other three I was chased into a thick forest, getting toyed with until the ghost types got bored. When they did I was assaulted by the others, getting burned alive before getting ripped into in a very slow and painful manner.
Mine was by far the most gruesome while Alora's was the least.
The four eyes are the Ghost Types that did the deeds.
Banette - Dusknoir
Haunter - Litwick
I would have gone into more detail but I don't want to.
If I had the skills I would have drawn the others but they were too gruesome for me to draw at this point.
Minate belongs to/is me
Banette, Dusknoir, Haunter, Litwick and Minun belong to pokemon
I'm glad I'm improving like this but I don't know if I should take "I almost didn't reckognize this drawing as yours" as a good thing or a bad
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On Minate, himself, I think that the feet and paws are a bit large o3o And the feet look a bit weird . I think the scarf is a bit long, too. It looks a lot longer than in your reference pictures or past pictures (from what I can remember, don't quote me on that, I have a bad memory). The expression is something to work on, too. Should look a bit more horrified, you know c: Maybe even crying because you just lost your best friends. And, again, the tail and ears look just a little too big for you there XD;;
In the background, I think it would have looked better if you had tried to do a forest-y background. Since you are in the forest in this scene. But on this, the glow on the eyes maybe could be brighter? Or maybe make the eyes lineless. It would have made more of an impact if this part was a bit creepier o3o Instead of this, you could have done maybe the forest with the ghosts lurking behind the trees or something?
Making it darker would look nice, too. Oh, and before I forget, shading. Gotta work on that shading, again c: And that's all, I guess ouo Hope this helps!
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